Maybe it’s better to be smelly

It was six in the morning when Alice went back to Zedadias’ house, and Zedadias had clearly just gotten out of bed to answer the door. Alice was asking to be let in when she realised that Kev had followed her this time. Zedadias gave Kev a distrustful look as he invited them both inside.

Or maybe he thinks Kev looks like a jellyfish, I’m not sure.

Kev immediately made himself at home.

Alice tried to use Zedadias’ shower. As usual, her host came in to tell her that was inappropriate. Alice is used to that sort of embarrassment now, though. What she wasn’t used to was the shower breaking and springing a leak all over the floor.

Alice being a conscientious good-hearted person, I told her to try and fix the shower before Zedadias noticed.

But when Zedadias came into the room and discovered that not only had this teenager he had just met been stripping off and using his shower, but now she was taking it apart with a wrench, he ordered both Alice and Kev out of the house immediately.

Next: Second Chance

32 Responses to “Maybe it’s better to be smelly”


  1. 1 Waste_Manager June 10, 2009 at 9:34 am

    This is just incredible. The best play-through type blog I have ever read I think.

  2. 2 Heinzy June 10, 2009 at 11:25 am

    This is awesome. Keep up the good work!

  3. 3 EL June 11, 2009 at 6:11 pm

    My favorite line is: “Or maybe he thinks Kev looks like a jellyfish, I’m not sure.” — Made me chuckle😀

  4. 9 Al June 11, 2009 at 7:56 pm

    To be fair if this was RL and a guy saw a pretty teenage girl stripping in his bathroom he wouldn’t be kicking her out…

  5. 14 Nicole June 13, 2009 at 2:02 am

    I love it so much its so sad but it makes me laugh alot

  6. 15 Trish June 13, 2009 at 8:12 pm

    The reason why Zedadias thinks of a jellyfish is becuz he thinks that Kev is spineless…..:)

  7. 17 Angelia June 13, 2009 at 9:17 pm

    DRAT! >:O( I blame Kev for following her. She coulda had it SWEET. Now … it’s all gone to hell in a handbasket once more.

  8. 18 Francesca June 17, 2009 at 4:31 am

    Zed’s face in the first picture reminds me so much of my friend Marisa… Seriously. It’s kind of creepy. Well, I really like this! Good work.

  9. 19 hickery June 17, 2009 at 10:02 pm

    Aw! That’s terrible.😦

    Poor Alice! Though, I must say,I can’t really blame Zedadias.:/

  10. 20 Iya June 18, 2009 at 12:37 pm

    i’m so hooked! better than a soap opera, hahaha! i just wish things would look good in the future for alice. please???

  11. 21 erin June 18, 2009 at 8:10 pm

    wow this is a good story. i wish there was a book similar to this. it is very interesting and im hooked. i want sims three! it looks way more advanced.

  12. 22 seppun1 June 21, 2009 at 2:10 pm

    Maybe he was thinking that Kev was spineless? *shrugs* The thought came to me when I was studying the pic.

  13. 23 Absafraginlootly June 25, 2009 at 5:46 am

    You know there are showers and a bath tub at the gym, you can use them any time. There is also a fridge.

  14. 24 dramalama July 6, 2009 at 2:53 am

    look Zed has his glasses off!

  15. 25 Kat July 8, 2009 at 2:19 am

    You know, the pool and gym have free showers she could probably use.

  16. 26 Sophie July 9, 2009 at 3:43 pm

    im not trying to insult amybody and dont take this the wrong way , but this is pretty close to real life and i think robin is trying to stick as close to real life as he can , and in real life you wouldnt be aloud into a gym just to use a shower (:

    i hope it all gets better for alice

  17. 27 nikki July 20, 2009 at 4:34 pm

    cool i love the sims three i love how you made it sound so life like

  18. 28 Lazanja July 25, 2009 at 12:33 pm

    I think the jellyfish means that he smells like pee… If you get stung by a jellyfish, you should pee on your skin – oh, and it’s yellow too.

  19. 29 Matt August 17, 2009 at 1:58 am

    Keeping in mind that Kev urinated on himself earlier in the day, methinks the jellyfish icon is either

    a) a “golden cloud” – showers, etc. Self-explanatory

    b) or a jellyfish, because a common method for soothing jellyfish sting is to urinate on the wound, or pour ammonia on it (which is in urine).

    Epic win.

  20. 30 Gabi August 18, 2009 at 1:06 am

    tho, it is sad, u can always kick in funnyness. u shoud be a writer!

  21. 31 omg April 26, 2010 at 11:27 pm

    DID U NOTICE ZED HAS SOME SEXXXI UNDERWEAR ..WOO WOO ;D

  22. 32 Suzzi Q August 8, 2010 at 1:41 am

    Hmmm….I love what the childish Sims think


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