Second Chance

Alice and Kev are ejected from Zedadias’ house, and are left on his front lawn in a foul mood. Even Alice’s patience runs thin when the passing paperboy complains about the smell.

Alice and Kev have a massive argument outside Zedadias’ front door. Alice blames it on her father and his inappropriate nature, conveniently ignoring that it was her that broke the shower.

Kev’s not really listening, though, as he really really has to go.

So he rings the bell again to negotiate their re-entrance to the house, while Alice throws up.

As Kev is yet to actually do anything mean to Zedadias, he agrees to give them a second chance.

This is a decision he will soon regret.

Next: Unlucky

23 Responses to “Second Chance”


  1. 1 tycho June 10, 2009 at 1:25 pm

    Brilliant – you have a knack for story telling – please keep it up.

  2. 3 Drew June 10, 2009 at 2:47 pm

    more, more, more!! Hurry it up!

  3. 5 Bette Porter June 10, 2009 at 3:01 pm

    Wonderful storytelling! Please please continue!!!

  4. 6 Vadermath June 10, 2009 at 3:12 pm

    Simply amazing. Please keep this up…

  5. 7 laurenfofauren June 10, 2009 at 4:45 pm

    i must know what happens! please keep posting!😀

  6. 8 tottiittot June 10, 2009 at 5:02 pm

    I like your story
    it’s a lot of fun

  7. 9 AxiomThree June 10, 2009 at 5:07 pm

    I, too, am hooked. Added to RSS, will be awaiting the conclusion!

  8. 10 Angelia June 13, 2009 at 9:18 pm

    Oh dear … oh dear, oh dear, oh dear! No regrets! NO REGRETS!

  9. 11 Twyst June 15, 2009 at 2:36 am

    duhn duhn duuuuuuh!!
    *bites nails*

  10. 13 HJ June 17, 2009 at 6:44 pm

    I’m reading this shit at work and trying not to lmao all over the place😛

  11. 14 CookieMaster June 18, 2009 at 5:10 am

    The picture of Kev having to go to the bathroom was priceless. xD

  12. 16 Robodude June 18, 2009 at 9:38 am

    lmao so funny

  13. 17 shiva June 25, 2009 at 4:53 am

    she’s giving that paperboy a death glare. lol.

  14. 18 Sophie July 9, 2009 at 3:45 pm

    =0 that house belongs to one of my sims boyfriends😛 but zedius dosent live there =s ?

  15. 19 kate July 9, 2009 at 10:24 pm

    why did she throw up??

  16. 21 faye July 14, 2009 at 2:32 am

    lol this is pure gold, you are so funny, I’m sat giggling at 2.30am. My housemates must think I have the insane trait

  17. 22 Ricardo Jevoux July 22, 2009 at 2:29 am

    I see the “bulimic” trait showing up.

  18. 23 Dragon13 July 24, 2010 at 5:18 pm

    pics number 3 and 4 are priceless.😄 great story, best i’ve ever read.


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