Continued Compassion

After Alice and Zedadias had each eaten a slice of the needlessly expensive cake, they returned to Zedadias’ house. I wanted Alice to ask him to let her sleep over, but the conversation option wasn’t there. While I can exert a large amount of control over my characters when I choose to, I often can’t make them say something if they’re not ready to do that, and Alice, for whatever reason, didn’t want to. It was late in the evening before she felt ready.

But she need not have worried. Zedadias was happy to give her the spare bed for the night.

Once again, Zedadias has shown a small amount of compassion, but it’s still more than anyone has ever done for her in her life.

Next: Midnight

158 Responses to “Continued Compassion”


  1. 1 Sarah July 3, 2009 at 3:41 pm

    aw that was so sweet of him.

  2. 6 mmm11105 July 3, 2009 at 3:41 pm

    Alice,

    Please marry Zed and KILL Kev

  3. 7 Jonathen July 3, 2009 at 3:45 pm

    Will they go out???

  4. 8 Jeroxy July 3, 2009 at 3:46 pm

    wow! This is the first step to being able to get a proper foothold in life for Alice! Horray for awsome people like zedadias!

  5. 9 Jenni July 3, 2009 at 3:53 pm

    Yay for Z! Hopefully she’ll be able to take a shower, too.

  6. 10 Jennifer July 3, 2009 at 3:53 pm

    Alice grew up to be quite pretty.🙂

  7. 11 Xercies July 3, 2009 at 3:55 pm

    I can see them getting together in the future…

  8. 13 thecub July 3, 2009 at 3:56 pm

    Stop teasing! Tell us what Kev’s up to already.

  9. 14 jess n. July 3, 2009 at 3:59 pm

    HOW ABOUT KEV! I GOTS TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO HIM!

  10. 15 Jackrabbit July 3, 2009 at 4:00 pm

    Kev, hopefully, will never return. May he fall off a bridge or something. Anyway, I’m not objectionable to Alice getting into a relationship with Zed.

    • 16 Grey Sky (Yesmy1standlastnamesarereal) lol July 3, 2009 at 8:19 pm

      I totally agree Jackrabbit!

      Hopefully Kev does disappear!

      AND ZED and ALICE should so date!

      Don’t you think friendship has already been thrown out the window? I mean he IS letting her sleepover (though they won’t do anything) but STILL!

      YOU GO YOUNG ADULT ALiCE!

      –Grey Sky

  11. 17 jess n. July 3, 2009 at 4:00 pm

    haha when zededias was hugging alice, you could see a green odour emanating from alice’s body and zed’s face is all scrunched up. haha.

  12. 18 Smurfy July 3, 2009 at 4:05 pm

    I hope Alice and Kev die painful deaths very soon.

  13. 23 Treena July 3, 2009 at 4:25 pm

    Now hopefully Alice can settle down… Away from Kev.

  14. 24 Smirch July 3, 2009 at 4:31 pm

    Hopefully this relationship will lead to Alice finally washing that ass. Zed would appreciate it I’m sure. Whats the deal with Kev?! Is he still on his walkabout?!

  15. 25 Kansine July 3, 2009 at 4:37 pm

    They’re obviously becoming a couple, I can hear the wedding bells already😄

  16. 26 Robbo July 3, 2009 at 4:42 pm

    I reckon the story won’t get back to Kev for another few ‘episodes’. I think it’d be cool to increase the suspense and have him return next week in a fantastic twist. I can’t imagine what he’s doing, and having played the game extensively I know there’s not a lot you CAN do by just walking out of the town. In fact, if you’re sims leave the town they’re gone, into the abyss, and will never return.

    • 27 kansine July 3, 2009 at 11:31 pm

      Whaaat??? Really? If they walk to the edge of the town they will never come back! WOW, I MUST test that right now, even if it’s 1:30 AM here😄

  17. 28 Olivia July 3, 2009 at 4:46 pm

    Awww That’s So Sweet But Were Did Kev Go Is He Gonna Die???

  18. 29 Anne July 3, 2009 at 4:49 pm

    Awww. Alice and Zed make a cute couple.

  19. 30 missginius July 3, 2009 at 4:50 pm

    How sweet =)

    Take his glasses off!!!!

  20. 31 Dryad61 July 3, 2009 at 4:55 pm

    Does Zed have the “good” trait or is he romantically interested?

  21. 33 Kat July 3, 2009 at 4:57 pm

    The story has taken an interesting twist but I am still dying to know what kev is doing…

  22. 34 Livvi July 3, 2009 at 4:57 pm

    I hope Kev really DID wander into an abyss, Robbo.

    Awwww, Zedidas is such a sweetheart!! Him and Alice need to be together! And Alice is so pretty!!

  23. 35 Kelsey July 3, 2009 at 4:59 pm

    aww come on make your posts longer!

  24. 36 chaka July 3, 2009 at 5:00 pm

    THIS. I SHIP IT. I never thought I would say that I have a Sims couple I adored, but here you go. Zed and Alice forever!

  25. 38 thumbbook July 3, 2009 at 5:00 pm

    What the…what happened to Kev??? Oh my…the suspense is killing me! I have to wait until tomorrow for the next post? You’re mean…you’ve got me so hooked on this!

  26. 39 Tenshi July 3, 2009 at 5:11 pm

    Maybe “Alice and Kev” will become “Alice and Zed”

  27. 40 A-Sha July 3, 2009 at 5:12 pm

    Sweet!❤

  28. 41 Rob July 3, 2009 at 5:13 pm

    I think this series is coming to an end. Kev wandered off and I don’t think he’ll ever be back. Alice has a good thing going and wedding bells can happen mighty quick in this game. Let’s face it, if it wasn’t for the green stink on her, I think Zedadias would be ready to offer her a different bed, if you know what I mean. Men are like that.

  29. 45 Froggie899 July 3, 2009 at 5:14 pm

    This is such a wonderful journey you are taking us on. I stumbled upon it, how I don’t remember but spent a considerable amount of time “catching” up. This is so muct better that a daytime television soap.

  30. 46 Leis July 3, 2009 at 5:27 pm

    Couple of questions: Now that she’s transitioned to her next stage of growth, has she got any new aspirations? And now that she’s out of school, does she lose her job? She originally started the job simply to improve her grades.

    • 47 Pantalones July 3, 2009 at 6:12 pm

      Yeah. I don’t know if this is what you were asking or not, Leis, but I was wondering a couple things about Alice now too. What’s her new trait, and what’s her lifetime wish?

      I know you don’t lose your job when you grow up, Leis–or at least, you didn’t in the sims 2. So I doubt you would in ts3

      • 48 Jaclyn July 3, 2009 at 9:35 pm

        You can have part-time jobs in TS3 as young adults, adults, or even elders. Chances are, she kept the job.

  31. 49 rachel July 3, 2009 at 5:28 pm

    This will sound rude… and so I apologize ahead of time, but… what the hell are you doing that restrains you to only making one single tiny post a day… and making us wait forever… or at least it seems like forever to your deeply devoted fans.

    • 50 Pantalones July 3, 2009 at 6:09 pm

      I don’t know, Rachel, maybe she has a life and other obligations, and maybe she just doesn’t feel like spending a lot of time on a blog every day? And maybe you need to lose that sense of entitlement and remember that her day doesn’t revolve around you? And maybe, if they’re too short for you, do what I do and only check once a week or every few days so they build up and are more to read at once.

      • 51 LoTekK July 3, 2009 at 6:20 pm

        Him. Robin’s a guy.🙂
        And yeah, rachel, seriously. His life doesn’t revolve around yours. Enjoy this entertainment, and quite feeling like you’re /entitled/ to his time.

      • 52 sixseventrooper July 4, 2009 at 8:50 pm

        ROBIN’S A GUY??????????? wow.

    • 53 Courtney July 3, 2009 at 6:44 pm

      While apologizing before saying something rude doesn’t absolve you I have often longed for the days of the past when he updated multiple times a day,

      It seems like the more popular the blog has gotten the more he strings it out. Haha. Good marketing tactic. It keeps us coming back, and elongates the story.

  32. 54 Paige July 3, 2009 at 5:28 pm

    love it!!!! how could you not?

  33. 55 Paige July 3, 2009 at 5:31 pm

    i dont even know or remember how or why i found this post. i think i went on to google and searched the sims 3 stories. but i just love it!!!!!!!!

  34. 56 Becci July 3, 2009 at 6:10 pm

    Wow this is so addictive! Hope Alice and Zedadias will get together : ) What happened to Kev and the ghost woman??

  35. 57 Cookie July 3, 2009 at 6:16 pm

    Am I the only one who ever gets distracted by his sunglasses?

    Shiny…

  36. 60 jeff July 3, 2009 at 6:33 pm

    if you like this story many of you would probably enjoy reading the Internal Monologue of Cassandra Goth. its an awesome read about the character cassandra goth from the sims 2. http://thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=27660&asset_type=story&user_id=133888 its come to an end so you can read it fully.

    • 61 :) July 17, 2009 at 6:58 pm

      Wow, thanks so much for posting this note, its just as addicting as Alice and Kev. Its so inspiring and kept me hooked, I finished it all in one day!!! I would recommend it to anyone, you get to see Cassandra Goth in a whole new way, thanks again for posting!!!

  37. 62 Katy July 3, 2009 at 6:36 pm

    This story is so awesome. I hope that Alice and Zedadias end up together. Maybe they’ll plot to ‘get rid of’ Kev….hehehehe!!

    • 63 Patali July 4, 2009 at 10:44 am

      That’s it. Shame on you all who think Kev should die. Did you forget, Kev has mental issues, and he’s elderly. Alice should at least take care of him until his obviously not far off death.

  38. 64 Ryann July 3, 2009 at 6:36 pm

    COME BACK KEV! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  39. 69 Alice sim July 3, 2009 at 6:56 pm

    Kev is a huge peice of humor in the story…like when he kissed that girl and then asked her mother to marry him, and i hope he doesn’t go forever! Just watch out Kev, it’s a seamless neighborhood, you could get lost.

  40. 70 suckmykiss July 3, 2009 at 7:19 pm

    I do ship Alice and Zed, but I would like to see Kev stick around just to create humor. However, if they get married, doesn’t Zed have to move in with Alice? Sucks for him.

    • 71 Samantha July 3, 2009 at 11:43 pm

      I suppose he would have to move in but he’d bring all his money with him and they could move right back into his old place, lol

    • 72 Kalheka July 4, 2009 at 12:02 am

      No. In the Sims 3 you can break up households like that when sims move. Only Alice need move.

  41. 73 kittykay July 3, 2009 at 7:19 pm

    Awe, that’s so sweet! I hope Alice and Z get together.❤

  42. 74 Heirii13 July 3, 2009 at 7:32 pm

    Haha~! You never fail to let me down, oh great author! (who’s name shall not be uttered because they are so magnificent) I wake up every morning, turn on the computer, and check for a new chapter… which is always waiting for me. ^^
    THANK YOU for taking the time out of your day for us!

    “Z” is such a mystery, he’s so kind to Alice and seems helpful whenever she’s in a pinch… also, he never reveals his eyes. Maybe he’s a super hero?! We just need to plaster a big “Z” on his flaming red shirt and I’d believe it.

  43. 77 holly July 3, 2009 at 7:41 pm

    What has happened to kev? Is her crazy father still going to be in it? I hope kev comes back and makes amends with Alice before he passes! He better or else that is just cruel Alice has come such a long way for Kev not to! Will kev ever come back? Or is he gone for good? Kev has made his only daughter come from the deep seas of an abyss and back! Kev you better come back!

    • 78 Kalheka July 4, 2009 at 12:03 am

      I’m kind of guessing he’s gone on a quest to marry someone who can give him ambrosia before he kicks the final garbage can.

  44. 79 Stoopidtallkid July 3, 2009 at 7:43 pm

    I hope Alice doesn’t get hurt by this. Zed looks like he’s got a bit too much self-interest for a good relationship, and Alice will probably put up with anything after dealing with Kev for so long.

  45. 80 Dylan J July 3, 2009 at 7:44 pm

    Seems to me that, given the fact Alice has already gone through two life stages, Kev is probably reaching the end of elderhood. That is to say, the walking out into the middle of nowhere is a story way to deal with the Sims automatic age death.

  46. 84 saw July 3, 2009 at 7:46 pm

    short but amazing post!!! u can tell Zededias ansd Alice will go out. Hopefully and Kev will soon die…Great agin Robin!

  47. 85 Morgiie July 3, 2009 at 7:48 pm

    Told Ya So ;]
    Now They’re Gonna Get Married ♥

  48. 86 Kir July 3, 2009 at 7:57 pm

    Short, but sweet, and fantastic continuing story as always.

    Though, I have to say, I keep seeing a lot of people saying Alice and Zed need to get married for her to be happy and all that. As compassionate as he is, and great as it would be for her to find someone, I don’t think Alice should just get married and have her problems solved, happily ever after. She’s a fighter, not a damsel needing to be saved.

    She’ll save herself, and get the guy after. =)

  49. 87 Jourdan July 3, 2009 at 7:57 pm

    OMG I want to see grandchildren!

  50. 88 Miko July 3, 2009 at 8:11 pm

    Have some questions:

    1. Who is Alice’s biological mother (Who would do the nasty with KEV??)

    2:That brings up another question. Were they always homeless, or was there a happy, previous life that went wrong, making Kev bitter and mean? Maybe there was a Mother in the picture.

  51. 89 Ada July 3, 2009 at 8:15 pm

    Having not played the game I was hoping someone could answer this question…

    Is Zed another player? Was he constructed by Robin, the same person who constructed Alice and Kev? Is he a part of the computer town? Where does Zed or anyone else outside of Alice and Kev come from?

    • 90 JayBee July 3, 2009 at 8:39 pm

      It depends Zed can be created but there are also characters that come with the town that will grow and develop right along with the ones you’re playing.

    • 91 Melissa July 3, 2009 at 8:45 pm

      Z is an NPC. The game comes with a town fully populated and through story progression it will age the rest of the town and have them get jobs and have babies and die and whatnot. Everything is mostly seamless so you can see the other houses and people walking around.

      • 92 Samantha July 3, 2009 at 11:48 pm

        It is true that Z is an npc, but it would be nice to know where he came from because in the neighborhood that house is empty to start with and z doesn’t exist. I would like to know if he grew up in riverview, move in from out of town (some do that) or if he was create and dropped in during edit town mode.

  52. 93 Tanja July 3, 2009 at 8:29 pm

    I smell possible love in the air

  53. 94 nick. July 3, 2009 at 8:37 pm

    what happened to kev?! its killing me, haha.

  54. 95 JayBee July 3, 2009 at 8:38 pm

    Is it wrong that I hope they find love? I can’t help it!

    • 96 JenaSim July 3, 2009 at 10:02 pm

      Totally not wrong to wish them love! However, I really think Alice should find love elsewhere.. Like, in a hobby (gardening) or with new friends.. She is SO not ready for romantic involvement. She needs to experience normalcy.. and how to interact with normal people.. lol

  55. 98 GingerKid July 3, 2009 at 8:48 pm

    I agree with Kir! I would be disappointed if they got married and that solved all of Alice’s problems. Although it would be a great ending, it seems like it’s an all too easy way out. Of course, unless Zedidias moved to the park with Alice and they continued building their lives together from nothing. I think everyone is hooked on the struggle Alice is dealing with and although everyone wants to see her succeed, I think we all would prefer if she worked for it and didn’t get married and get all Zedidias’ money and home.

    Again, you are doing a great job at keeping this story going and all of us hanging on! I find myself coming on every day to see what Alice and Kev are up to.

  56. 99 ScanlonB July 3, 2009 at 9:15 pm

    I really love Alice and Kev!
    I agree with those who think Alice and Z should go out.. he is the only person who ever showed her love and Kev should just leave. forever.
    The only thing I don’t like is that each update is so short! X3 lol

  57. 100 DarkRexx July 3, 2009 at 9:19 pm

    The story would be way too simple if it ended up Alice + Zed = Happily Ever After. I’m thinking it’s almost too easy.

    As for Kev, my theory is this: What if he wasn’t always such a social Godzilla? I think he could actually have been a pretty decent guy before his wife left the scene. They might have been very in love, and then Mrs. Kev had an unfortunate demise, driving Kev into a spiraling pit of depression and anger from which he can only people that remind him of his past (Alice). Maybe the reason he’s so flirty is because he’s desperately trying to fill a void left my the passing of his love. Maybe his eventual failure with his latest conquest has caused him to need some alone time to think.

    Then again, there’s an equally good chance he’s out catching butterflies and wondering about llamas, just to be fair.

    • 101 Kat July 4, 2009 at 6:41 am

      Why Are the people who make the sims so obbsessed with lamas anyway?

    • 103 Ingrid July 4, 2009 at 8:48 am

      I do so hope Kev survives to grandparenthood. He could still be such an interesting foil in this story. Example: Alice and Zedadias marry and have a baby. Kev shows up. Can you imagine that?

      Baby: “Mommy, why does grampa Kev hate me?”
      or,
      Baby: “Daddy, why does grampa Kev like to slap me?”

      Yes it’s sick, but life’s like that. We know what Alice would do, but what about Zedadias?

      Better yet, Alice realizes as her child grows up that it’s a throwback to Grampa Kev (cue the music from Psycho’s shower scene!)

      Oh, and to y’all who are complaining about RoBurky not being here as much as before: It could be that he’s fielding calls and job offers from gaming companies. If I ran one, I’d most certainly be after his employable carcass. As it is, I’d just like to adopt him.😀

    • 104 Ryann July 4, 2009 at 10:21 am

      Kev was born with those traits, he doesn’t have a dramatic before story! He’s just that way

  58. 105 kev4ever July 3, 2009 at 9:35 pm

    Alice is going to find Zedadias in bed with Anita.

  59. 106 Anna July 3, 2009 at 9:38 pm

    but… I still wanna know where Kev’s gone off to!!
    and i think, as great as it would be for Alice and Zededias to get together and all, i find it unlikely. I just don’t know.

  60. 107 Erik July 3, 2009 at 9:50 pm

    D’awwwwwwww!!!😀

    As much as I’m happy for Alice, though, I really wanna know where Kev is going!

  61. 109 Choklad July 3, 2009 at 9:52 pm

    Awww. I really hope Alice can get a real job now to improve her life a little. Wonder what career Zededias is in. He’s a little older than her, but I wouldn’t mind if they got together. I’d prefer Alice just staying friends with him and dating someone else though. I’d like to see her with a whole bunch of friends AND a happy relationship.🙂

  62. 110 sia1978 July 3, 2009 at 10:57 pm

    Oh gosh. I’m hooked. I light up every day when I think, “Ooh, there might be another episode of Alice and Kev up.” It’s like my daily fix of soap opera, but better.

    In a way, I hope these two don’t find romance, because it’s more interesting seeing the situations Alice and Kev get themselves into, and the conflict between them which would be lost if either of them were to move away from the other. And getting a job – to me, it would be more realistic, as many real homeless people struggle to get a job without a permanent address, if Alice were to remain destitute. And if they gain money, it kind of defeats the point of the experiment. Or so I’d say.

  63. 111 Payton July 3, 2009 at 11:10 pm

    I really hope something happens between them!

  64. 112 ShannonAriel July 3, 2009 at 11:41 pm

    I agree, waiting all day for a few sentences definitely doesn’t feel worth the wait. The posts used to be a lot longer😦

  65. 113 Simluver July 3, 2009 at 11:55 pm

    I love how Zed’s always wearin those SCHNAZZY glasses😀

  66. 114 Hayley July 4, 2009 at 12:00 am

    Awww!So cute

  67. 115 Maria July 4, 2009 at 12:08 am

    Alice and Zededias should get married, then Zededias should move into the park! I hate Kev but I hope he doesn’t die, at least not yet. He should come back to the park and meet his grandchildren! Before Zededias moves in with Alice, they should try for baby (if it’s possible).

  68. 116 Bethany July 4, 2009 at 1:14 am

    To the Questions about the Ghost Woman and Kev, Ive had a theory for a long time. What If the Ghost woman WAS Alice’s Mother. The only person we have ever seen Kev really related to? Any comments on this??

  69. 117 xconfessions July 4, 2009 at 1:21 am

    I’ve never come across this blog before, it’s pretty cool though. I spent like over an hour reading it today. I need a life. I think I will buy Sims 3 now.

  70. 120 Miko July 4, 2009 at 1:51 am

    I don’t trust Zed. I’m thinking that Alice will fall for him and he’ll take advantage of her and possibly cheat. Ruining Alice’s confidence and thus sending her along to another home and continuing the blog

  71. 124 neon July 4, 2009 at 2:07 am

    great story man but your starting to make each chapter way too short….

  72. 125 Cody July 4, 2009 at 2:09 am

    still a little curious as to where kev is going

  73. 126 PhZ July 4, 2009 at 2:22 am

    Nice story, I follow it every time I play sims 3. I also liked your webpage (linked it too), I’m too paranoid to download any of the games on it but still, nice.

    I’m sure you’ve heard this before, but I bet you could turn this story into some sort of money making opportunity. In a perfect world you would partner with EA and sell some custom stuff for points. Unless you ARE working for EA, in that case, good show! In any case, good job, I mean.

  74. 127 Azalea_Sway July 4, 2009 at 3:03 am

    It’s happening! They have to fall in love! He’s the only one who would and could take good care of her!❤❤❤😀

    • 128 jess n. July 4, 2009 at 3:29 am

      i don’t want them to fall in love. that would just ruin the story. the story is supposed to be SAD you dumbo.

      • 129 Azalea_Sway July 4, 2009 at 7:43 am

        It’s not “supposed to be SAD.” It’s IMPLIED to be sad. What’s so wrong with you? Is it so wrong to wish her happiness? It’s in my nature. BE HAPPY FOR ONCE! SMILE!😀

  75. 130 Meagan July 4, 2009 at 4:50 am

    alice and z sittin’ in a tree k.i.s.s.i.n.g. first comes love,then comes marrige,then comes a babby carrege, and what hell happened to kev

  76. 134 katierose July 4, 2009 at 5:07 am

    yea for Alice
    but what about Kev where did he GOOOOOOOOOO

  77. 135 Kat July 4, 2009 at 6:52 am

    I feel as if Robin is now revolving this story around us and granting our every wish… I wish he would put a super interesting twist and make Alices mother come back

  78. 136 meezletoe July 4, 2009 at 8:00 am

    I’m suddenly worried. What if this story has an unhappy ending?
    Either for the sake of being epic or for the sake of our understanding the reality of homelessness or something?? o_o
    Or both?
    I mean, everyone here already has high hopes! What if the story is misleading everybody at the moment in order for us all to be hit hard by the seriousness of her situation??
    WHAT IF IT’S A TRAGEDY?!?!!

    • 137 saw July 4, 2009 at 8:09 am

      What if you just wait and see!!!?

      • 138 Samantha July 4, 2009 at 9:19 am

        I think its sort of part of the enjoyment of the story thinking about what happens next. I’ve never thought about it being a happy ending vs tragedy but I have been worried it won’t provide much closure. with the story surrounding alice and kev being homeless and their struggles I worry when kev dies how that will affect the story. I worry if alice finds someone to marry will that be it? will it be she lived happily ever after the end? I think if she marries before kev dies she’d probably be too good to leave him on the park bench and offer him the spare room (or couch if she has no extra bed)…which could help keep the story going a little bit longer as he’d still try to annoy her.

        While i don’t want it to be a tragedy I would like to follow alice’s life as long as is possible. I hope that when this story is over another one takes its place. Perhaps a little girl and her big brother are abandoned by their parents. The parents could actually be living in the neighborhood in a nice house while the kids were left in a shack. (perhaps I will try to do this now that I’ve thought of it)

  79. 139 Jon July 4, 2009 at 10:09 am

    If this is a soap opera Kev will come back just in time to ruin the wedding somehow…

  80. 140 gothic_chick_demon July 4, 2009 at 10:27 am

    Well i hope they dont get togather she needs to fight for her happiness it shouldent just be thrown in her lap maby they could be roommates and she work at the market pay her bills get some new clothing and start working on a carrer.

    • 141 lightninginyoureye July 18, 2009 at 6:53 pm

      but why? Doesn’t Alice look like she deserves a break every now and then? An ending, or a segment of the story involving Alice and Zed would be endearing, to my opinion, and Alice does enough fighting in her life already. I think that she deserves one good thing to happen to her, even if it is her and Zed.

  81. 142 ♥RAWR♥ July 4, 2009 at 10:35 am

    they got a little “thing” going on???(bo chica wow wow)

  82. 144 Jackie July 4, 2009 at 11:08 am

    I never really got into soap operas (except out of desperation to watch something, ANYTHING! in English), and I certainly never felt much for any of the characters. This, on the other hand, is absolutely addictive. Even though the only actual human involved is roBurky, it’s way more compelling than any soap opera I’ve ever watched. As soon as I finish reading one post, I feel disappointed that it’s over, and I can’t wait for the next one. Incredible!

  83. 145 bethekins July 4, 2009 at 4:10 pm

    I hope these two hook up at some point :3

  84. 146 Doom. July 4, 2009 at 4:19 pm

    So the cake wasn’t a lie?

  85. 147 Sayoni July 4, 2009 at 5:05 pm

    awww, so sweet

  86. 148 JustSomeGirl July 4, 2009 at 8:10 pm

    Zedadias and Alice would be a perfect couple! She could move in with him, get a job, steady income… They could get married and have children! The past wouldn’t matter anymore, just the future!

    Although, I would like for Kev to remain in the story! He has shown a few signs of wanting to bond with his daughter… He is insane, and homeless… Despite her feelings for him, Kev needs Alices help once she manages to pick her own life up!

  87. 149 Franica July 4, 2009 at 10:51 pm

    roBurky, you are such a tease! You must be really busy, because these chapters are getting shorter and shorter. I’m so hooked on this story it’s become my online soap opera. Keep up the good work!

  88. 150 Ryann Woods July 5, 2009 at 10:42 am

    This is his 40th entry

  89. 151 wisefool July 7, 2009 at 3:19 am

    I don’t trust Zed. How old is he?

  90. 152 nicollecrayola July 10, 2009 at 8:45 pm

    omg i want them to end up together ! :OO
    gosh i love this, i can’t stop reading O_O

  91. 153 lightninginyoureye July 18, 2009 at 6:49 pm

    I really want Alice and Zed to get together actualy. they get along so well and he’s really the only person in Alice’s life who shows any compassion toward her. It would be so cute!! X3

  92. 154 Raine July 21, 2009 at 6:53 pm

    He’s so sweet and kind to her.

  93. 155 Pink Urinal July 22, 2009 at 10:10 am

    I hope they two fall in love with each other. That would be totally sweet :”>

  94. 156 Aimee July 25, 2009 at 11:20 am

    Them 2 need to become like, lovers? It would be so nice and cute, and i mean, then she could move in with him and leave key, !

  95. 157 Carson November 21, 2009 at 7:19 pm

    I hope they fall in love🙂

  96. 158 Warken November 23, 2010 at 8:34 pm

    Lol, i just relized why Zedadia wants her to stay, she’s legal.😉
    Zedadia you dog!


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