Desperation

Alice wakes up outside Anita’s house feeling no better after her involuntary nap.

She heads inside to look for Anita, and fights the tiredness in order to swallow something of the remnants of a meal that was left out on the table.

Following Anita out into her back garden, Alice tries a last-ditch attempt to further befriend Anita.

Anita listens, but before Alice can ask again to be allowed to stay, she interrupts to say goodnight, and goes back inside to bed.

Alice is left standing outside in the dark, with nothing left for her to do but return alone to the park bench she had been fighting so hard to get away from.

Next: Mistakes

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134 Responses to “Desperation”


  1. 1 Mandy June 23, 2009 at 1:17 am

    when do u think alice will find true love??

  2. 3 borat June 23, 2009 at 1:36 am

    this sounds kinda embarassing but robin are u a girl or a boy? I don’t mean 2 offend or anythin but robin is kinda a neutral name…again not tryin 2 offend.

  3. 5 penny June 23, 2009 at 1:37 am

    save up lots of money for stuff like a bed and a frigde and other inportant stuff.

  4. 6 penny June 23, 2009 at 1:40 am

    yup probably the z guy,

  5. 7 Myles June 23, 2009 at 1:53 am

    Another good chapter, although it could have used some extra length.

  6. 8 Jules June 23, 2009 at 4:16 am

    hey, just an idea, but Alice should totally find a mate! that would be awesome! oh and she should save up for a telescope or something skillful so she can get a good job too!

  7. 9 Sims2Goddess June 23, 2009 at 5:01 am

    I am loving this story.

  8. 10 Miso June 23, 2009 at 5:21 am

    Did anyone ever tell you to become an author? You’re an amazing storyteller. But… your posting are getting SO much shorter. I really want to read!!!

  9. 11 Brittney June 23, 2009 at 6:30 am

    Whatever happened to that Z guy, anyway??? He seemed pretty sympathetic, I’m sure he’d let her have the couch to sleep on for a couple hours….

  10. 12 Shannon June 23, 2009 at 6:47 am

    I downloaded these two and have been playing them non-stop for the last three days. They finally have a small house that I built one room at a time as they earned money. Kev got married today to a woman as nuts as he is. They are both mean etc and work in the crime career. Alice is a young adult now and works as a cop. That makes the game so much fun when they’re all home together!

    Alice has the lucky trait now and also the genius trait. Along with her loser, clumsy etc traits.

    They are so much fun!

  11. 13 Josh June 23, 2009 at 7:43 am

    Poor Alice 😦

    The world just rains shit all over her doesn’t it?

  12. 14 Jeni June 23, 2009 at 10:55 pm

    Love your story and characters….I can’t stop coming back to read and pray you’ve updated…thank god you have, I thought I was just addicted to the Sims but now I’m addicted to your story!!
    LOL keep up the wonderful work!

  13. 15 katierose June 24, 2009 at 3:44 am

    ur story is great i love it
    i cant wait to get the simes 3

  14. 16 Rankaratar June 24, 2009 at 8:02 am

    Is she… Is she snoring from her crotch in the first image?


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