Better than Teddy

When Kev leaves the room to stagger over to Zedadias’ bed and fall asleep again, Alice bursts into sobbing tears.

Zedadias comes over to talk to her, and she begins to tell him a dramatic story. With a little interpretation of speech bubbles, I believe we can imagine that this is the story of her life.

She starts with a pond, which could be the waterlogged abandoned park where she lives.

And this speech bubble could represent her father.

When she’s finished, Zedadias quietly reaches out and pulls her into a friendly hug.

For him, it’s a small gesture. For her, this is one of the happiest moments of her life.

Next: Strange Social Rules

165 Responses to “Better than Teddy”


  1. 4 Lolly June 11, 2009 at 12:51 pm

    Oh wow, this story is fascinating. Can’t wait to get the game tomorrow.

  2. 9 Jazmeister June 11, 2009 at 1:08 pm

    This is SO better than TV.

    • 10 Qix June 11, 2009 at 6:41 pm

      I was thinking the same thing. Robin definitely has a knack for story telling. To me, Alice is more real than most the idiots in so called ‘reality’ shows.

      I was on the fence about buying this game already, I think this made it a definite buy now.

  3. 13 Somedude June 11, 2009 at 1:12 pm

    Wow, Zed’s a pretty nice guy given he’s wearing those gloves and sunglasses. I’m surprised he’s not wearing something with a popped collar.

  4. 14 SillySimzy June 11, 2009 at 1:13 pm

    I received the link for this blog from a user on the Sims 3 forums who thought it was something that everyone should view. It is! I’ve bookmarked the page, and I have to keep coming back for the next chapter. You’ve inspired me to try out homelessness in TS3 myself.

  5. 16 Em June 11, 2009 at 1:34 pm

    Saw this in the metro this morning – absolutely genius. I’m completely hooked… poor alice!

  6. 17 Ella June 11, 2009 at 2:01 pm

    I’ve added a Digg entry for this, as I thought it deserved it๐Ÿ™‚

    http://digg.com/pc_games/Homelessness_in_The_Sims_3_such_fun

  7. 18 Brock June 11, 2009 at 4:02 pm

    @Elia:
    There’s already one up there that I Dugg earlier:
    http://digg.com/pc_games/Virtual_Homelessness_in_The_Sims_3

  8. 19 Brock June 11, 2009 at 4:07 pm

    @Elia:
    I also dugg yours, the word should get out!๐Ÿ˜€

  9. 20 Mortal June 11, 2009 at 4:53 pm

    At first I was smirking, but now I realise that this is for real. I am genuinely saddened.

  10. 21 Little Green Man June 11, 2009 at 5:12 pm

    Wait this is in the metro? What the?

  11. 24 Thunderkor June 11, 2009 at 5:22 pm

    I’m afraid to get my hopes up for Alice for fear that those hopes will soon be dashed.

    Very compelling storytelling, thanks for sharing this with all of us.

  12. 25 Erin June 11, 2009 at 6:06 pm

    D’awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

  13. 26 Kucera June 11, 2009 at 6:13 pm

    Well… Felicia Day (The Guild, Dr. Horrible..) likes it too… She twittered it this morning.

    I like it too.

  14. 27 dreadpiraterose June 11, 2009 at 6:15 pm

    I saw this via Felicia Day’s Twitter, and I am so glad I found it. This is so captivating. I am subscribing to the RSS and promptly buying myself a copy of Sims 3. I had played the original (and all the expansions) for years. I had even been a Beta tester for The Sims Online. But Sims 2 never held much appeal. I must say, this makes me want to start playing it all over again. I can’t believe how far the game has come.

  15. 28 Little Miss Smile June 11, 2009 at 6:16 pm

    I’m so loving this =] I’m constantly checking for updates.

  16. 29 Gawain June 11, 2009 at 6:19 pm

    Good job getting on Felicia Day’s twitter! I’m hooked๐Ÿ™‚

  17. 31 THOR June 11, 2009 at 6:21 pm

    Came here courtesy of Felicia Day. All I have to say is: Best. Blog. Ever.

  18. 32 TomH June 11, 2009 at 6:22 pm

    I don’t understand how, but every single post is a cliffhanger and I can’t cope with the suspense.

    I don’t know if you have a job or if you’re a student or something, but you need to quit whatever else you’re doing RIGHT THE HELL NOW. You need to do THIS for a living.

    • 33 Hage June 11, 2009 at 6:33 pm

      Agree Homeless sims WIN \o/
      I have a question, you really imagine every step before doing it in The Sims or you just make a move and expect it to turn in something this awesome?

  19. 34 Hage June 11, 2009 at 6:30 pm

    This hug was more than friendly!!!

    • 35 dumpmunster June 12, 2009 at 9:19 am

      I’d hope its not tooo friendly, considering she’s probably like 13 and he’s old enough to own a house.

  20. 36 MP June 11, 2009 at 6:34 pm

    OMG This is the best!!!!

  21. 38 Rachel June 11, 2009 at 6:44 pm

    I’m so hooked! I can’t wait to see what’s next, give me more!!

  22. 39 hikingguy73 June 11, 2009 at 6:46 pm

    This is an excellent blog. Great story. I wish my PC could run TS3. I’m intrigued by the insanity trait.

  23. 40 Daghain June 11, 2009 at 6:56 pm

    This is by far the most fascinating thing I’ve read in a long time. I can’t wait to see what happens next!

  24. 41 fontgoddess June 11, 2009 at 7:01 pm

    This story is really compelling. This is the recommendation I put on my Facebook: “As an experiment, a games design student has created a homeless family in The Sims 3, and is blogging their lives. Alternately tragic and hilarious, this story shows how our digital doppelgangers can mirror reality too closely.” I believe this story says more than just that, but I’ll leave that up to the audience to see for themselves.

    I’m now really interested in your projects related to your game design education. Do you have a blog for that? I find your POV very interesting and can imagine you’re doing other work just as compelling as this.

  25. 44 Rene June 11, 2009 at 7:31 pm

    Wow! This is such an amazing story. I can hardly believe it was just through the game’s engine. You’ve built some really deep and complex characters!!

  26. 45 andrew June 11, 2009 at 7:39 pm

    this story is brutal. homeless, dirty, unloved, and now being groomed by a paedo in michael jackson gloves and shades. talk about art imitating life.

  27. 46 Emily June 11, 2009 at 7:39 pm

    This is really awesome. Thanks for publishing it. It makes me want to be wicked creative with my sims too.

  28. 47 Alfazil June 11, 2009 at 7:46 pm

    That is a great story.

  29. 48 PS June 11, 2009 at 7:47 pm

    You know you got in the Metro this morning, right? That’s incredible!

  30. 50 Y2Ken June 11, 2009 at 7:49 pm

    Also came through Felicia Day’s twitter – read all entries from the beginning and I absolutely adore it! Will continue to follow – am getting Sims 3 on Tues when my exams finish, was always going to do so but this has made me even more excited about it.

  31. 51 Karen June 11, 2009 at 8:44 pm

    this is the best sims 3 storyline ive ever read so far. KEEP GOING!!! you’ve got me hooked๐Ÿ™‚

  32. 52 Iris June 11, 2009 at 8:48 pm

    This is really awesome, I’m so impressed! I thought I was gonna skip on getting Sims 3 but this has thoroughly tempted me to give it a try.

  33. 53 Squiggy June 11, 2009 at 8:53 pm

    I actually want to get Sims 3 now.
    Love the story. It’s remarkably heart wrenching and well told.
    (Your narrating is also hilarious).

    Those are great screen shots. Do you do those with print screen in game?

  34. 55 Anna June 11, 2009 at 9:03 pm

    This is such a good story! I can’t wait for more. Also, I’d better get this out now, AWWWWH LOVE!!!โค

  35. 56 Erin June 11, 2009 at 9:19 pm

    definately better than TV

  36. 57 Kerry June 11, 2009 at 9:23 pm

    You thoroughly rock for this. Will come back for updates. I hope Alice can make something of her Sim Life!

  37. 58 laurenfofauren June 11, 2009 at 9:59 pm

    i love them!

  38. 59 hi June 11, 2009 at 10:08 pm

    I don’t like the sims 3 as much as the sims 2

  39. 61 Lysh June 11, 2009 at 10:26 pm

    I came here through Felicia Day’s Twitter, but I just noticed the official Sims 3 site linked here too! That is so awesome.

    This story is amazing.

  40. 62 Eric June 11, 2009 at 10:38 pm

    This makes me wonder. What is Kev’s backstory? Was he an Alice at one point? On the streets with a horrible parent, struggling like Alice? Or was he placed here by his own actions and circumstances? Where is Alice’s Mother? Will Alice become a Kev? And have an Alice of her own?

    • 63 Samantha June 16, 2009 at 6:13 am

      to think of kev as once a small homeless child makes me pity him. The fact of the matter is its quite possible that he once was an alice. With his hot-headed, insanity, and inapproproateness he could have easily flunked through school and not been able to achieve anything so that now he remains homeless. I think Alice…despite being unlucky….will somehow be able to build something for herself, maybe small but a start to improving circumstances for future generation.

  41. 64 Kayla June 11, 2009 at 11:11 pm

    Awww!! I just read the entire blog, beginning to end. I must say, you are quite creative. I’m on my way to download Alice and Kev, and create my own story.

  42. 65 Eve Petlyakov June 11, 2009 at 11:15 pm

    Omg I totally just got teary!!! I’m so happy for her…I can’t wait to see what happens next!

  43. 66 Az June 11, 2009 at 11:26 pm

    Oh wow this is one of the best stories I’ve seen. Better then TV by a long shot

  44. 67 Peter June 11, 2009 at 11:42 pm

    Added to my start.io to get updates notifications on this. You’re putting this story together so nicely.

  45. 68 whenbutterflys June 11, 2009 at 11:58 pm

    Aww. :*) Zededias = possible love interest?

  46. 69 eDRoaCH June 12, 2009 at 12:14 am

    Felicia day IS Alice.

  47. 70 Andrew June 12, 2009 at 12:47 am

    Please make this into a children’s book. Kids need to learn these sorts of things, especially that last bit: “For him, it’s a small gesture. For her, this is one of the happiest moments of her life.”

  48. 71 Katie June 12, 2009 at 12:50 am

    How did you get them to live in the park? I thought you had to move Sims into a house.

    Anyway, great job! And I thought my own Sims stories were entertaining and full of drama.๐Ÿ˜‰

  49. 73 diana June 12, 2009 at 12:57 am

    i want to know what happens next!! omg this story is amazing!

  50. 74 Static_Airwave June 12, 2009 at 1:22 am

    I clicked through from Entertainment Weekly’s PopWatch. So glad I did!

  51. 75 sugarplum* June 12, 2009 at 1:49 am

    so damn good.

  52. 76 Stephanie June 12, 2009 at 1:52 am

    Very well-written and entertaining story! I will definitely be following this.

  53. 77 Deacon June 12, 2009 at 2:21 am

    I can’t help but find this little blog compelling.. my very first and continued character is a teenager who has lost his parents, and once his “guardian” managed to get herself offed during a freak accident, he grew up quickly and decided it was time he fended for himself. Surprisingly, child services didn’t seem it was necessary to grant him another guardian, or even knock on his door after the guardian had died.

    Thanks to the openess of the local gym and at least the minor comforts offered by his guardian before her passing, he is now an exceptionally successful member of society, on the brink of becoming a young adult, with a fully furnished house and is one of the best minds and bodies of his city. I just wish there was a character like Alice that he could have interacted with.. come to think of it, the most interaction he’s had is with an evil fellow teenager, whom he’s declared his nemesis (and oddly keeps following him home after school, only to start multiple fights in which he loses).

    As far as using the household items, he doesn’t seem to mind in the least, and due to his traits, seems to prefer offering this small service to keep anyone he’s invited in happy. As far as everything breaking, he’s had to repair everything in his house and least three times by now and is quite handy with a wrench ^_^

  54. 78 Mary June 12, 2009 at 2:21 am

    Congrats on the Entertainment Weekly article! You can see it at http://popwatch.ew.com/popwatch/2009/06/homelessness-in-the-sims-3-creates-a-stunning-story-.html

    If it got me here, prepare for a tonnnn more traffic. I really want to see what happens next, and am tempted to go buy the Sims 3! ๐Ÿ™‚

  55. 79 Lisy June 12, 2009 at 2:33 am

    Just read the whole thing from Felicia Day’s Twitter.

    Really great story! Can’t wait to get home from work now and play Sims.

  56. 80 Ryker Beck June 12, 2009 at 3:00 am

    I so can’t wait to see what happens next. lmao! Brilliant.

  57. 81 Marla June 12, 2009 at 3:19 am

    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

  58. 82 Clark June 12, 2009 at 3:20 am

    she should age and get with zed.

  59. 83 Kurgan Nazzir June 12, 2009 at 3:33 am

    Very good story telling and screen shots to match. I followed the link from the Sims 3 site and just read the whole thing.

  60. 84 DAC June 12, 2009 at 3:56 am

    This is absolutely fascinating! And now people are downloading these characters into their games and replicating this girl’s pathetic life so they can witness ti first hand! I’d love to study this…

  61. 85 Cory June 12, 2009 at 4:10 am

    This story is so fascinating. It’s making me consider things I never thought about before, and I seriously feel moved to support a homeless charity. I never expected the Sims 3 to make have such deep thoughts.

  62. 86 Eric Richardville June 12, 2009 at 4:17 am

    Very sweet. It’s amazing how, when reading this you forget that they are a game. You get caught up in the story, very nice.

  63. 87 Mellissa June 12, 2009 at 4:45 am

    Wow… Just wow.

    -M

  64. 88 Ruby June 12, 2009 at 5:03 am

    Like everyone else, I’m amazed by this game! The writer deserves a lot of credit for bringing this to us, but I am truly amazed that this story has come to pass through the Sims’ free will.

    The little voice in the back of my head is saying ‘is this a wind up?’ but I’m just going to tell it to stuff it. Along with the little voice that’s telling me not to buy this!

  65. 89 Sueanne June 12, 2009 at 5:10 am

    Brilliant, awesome story. I love it. You’ve inspired me to create my own homeless and penniless crazy family!

  66. 90 Stacy June 12, 2009 at 6:10 am

    Found this on EW.com’s Popwatch. It’s an absolutly heartwrenching story… even though I know Alice is a Sim, I wish I could give her a hug. Great job with the storytelling, and kudos to the makers of the Sims 3 for making this kind of real life interaction possible. I’ll be back tomorrow to check for updates.

  67. 91 Freesnowcone June 12, 2009 at 7:05 am

    This is fantastic. God help me, I read it all from the very beginning, in one sitting.

  68. 92 scherazade June 12, 2009 at 8:20 am

    This is such fascinating work: clever, funny, poignant, and proving something really significant about the creativity gaming invents and invokes. And serialised story-telling repopularized? – bring it on!

  69. 93 Lack_26 June 12, 2009 at 8:48 am

    This is brilliant, and I’m certainly glad to see it in the press, it deserves it. Once my exams are over I’ll certainly be picking up a copy of the game.

  70. 94 cullnean June 12, 2009 at 8:59 am

    well done rob

  71. 95 Sophie June 12, 2009 at 9:44 am

    You also got a mention on the BBC website ( http://www.bbc.co.uk/blogs/magazinemonitor/2009/06/web_monitor_24.shtml)

    Very cool story – I had no idea that the Sims games had gotten so sophisticated. Please keep up the posts, I’m extremely curious to see what happens next!

  72. 96 greymountain30 June 12, 2009 at 11:42 am

    I read the whole story so far and it is brilliant. I can’t wait to see what happens, but so far I love what I read. Keep up the good work!

  73. 97 Dan S June 12, 2009 at 1:09 pm

    This is easily the best and most amusing soap I have watched. Knocks the cr*p out of Hollyoaks

  74. 98 laydehgad June 12, 2009 at 1:09 pm

    This is so interesting! I really want to try something like this myself. Look forward to reading some more๐Ÿ™‚

  75. 99 Mack Arillo June 12, 2009 at 1:41 pm

    This isn’t going to end well.

  76. 100 Shimarenda June 12, 2009 at 2:32 pm

    I know things in general will continue to be miserable for Alice, but it is touching to see her have at least one moment of pure happiness.

  77. 101 Sim3 fannn June 12, 2009 at 5:23 pm

    In the last picture she lookes soooooooo happy hugging him.

  78. 102 Catffeine June 13, 2009 at 1:34 am

    ok. I have been reading all of your posts in succession and I must be overly emotional right now because I just literally shed a tear at Alice’s good fortune – FINALLY getting a REAL hug. :*)

    • 103 monstrosity June 17, 2009 at 4:59 pm

      Me too – tears sprang to my eyes.

    • 104 bizkit(f) June 22, 2009 at 11:03 am

      ohkay wow..! =[ the whole time while reading this I imagined how I would’ve done things differently, but geeez, this touched my heart..! Even though it’s just a sim, I’m really happy for her to find someone that actually excepts her not seeing only her bad traits… WOW..!

  79. 105 Marns June 13, 2009 at 2:56 am

    That is so adorable.

  80. 106 Mo June 13, 2009 at 4:09 am

    *drools* he’s almost as hot a anderson cooper

  81. 108 Shelley June 13, 2009 at 8:37 pm

    AWWWW, This is so touching. Keep the stories coming, my 4 kids, my neice (ages ranging from 6 to 18) and I gather to follow the saga of “Poor Alice”, better than the soaps… It’s great how a game can give us all something to talk about and a bit of common ground so to speak. I have loves Sims since the originals but the ai has come so far that being a voyeur is so much more fascinating now! And that Zedadiahs, so sweet and caring,(and strangely attractive:P. Where was he when I was a goodclumsyunluckyloser teen. Oh yeah, still in someones imagination, sigh. Thanx Robin and congrats on your recent Sim fame!
    PS Shame on the Joy family….

  82. 109 Angelia June 13, 2009 at 9:20 pm

    Wow … kid looks like she’s on drugs from that hug. Must be nice!

  83. 110 Sara June 13, 2009 at 10:45 pm

    AWWW!!! I have a feeling that they are going to fall in love…

  84. 111 Ceissa Desiste June 16, 2009 at 5:06 am

    What a wonderful thing to happen to Alice! She is finally getting a bit of happiness in her life hopefully. I love this story thus far.

  85. 112 neon June 16, 2009 at 10:04 am

    did that guy really spontaneously hug her? if so that is soooo cute!

  86. 113 fashionstar117 June 17, 2009 at 12:07 am

    Awwwww the last pic was so cute!

  87. 114 Payton June 17, 2009 at 8:46 pm

    I hope that something becomes of her and Zedadias. I really do!๐Ÿ™‚

  88. 115 bballchick137 June 18, 2009 at 2:18 am

    wow i love your blog! you are such a talented writer and you have really been helping me with my blog!!! (just reading these storys) thankyou!๐Ÿ™‚

  89. 117 Pink Ink June 18, 2009 at 8:00 am

    She has a YETI for a father… how apt!

  90. 118 Whitney June 18, 2009 at 12:03 pm

    Wow. What a great friend๐Ÿ™‚ Alice deserves someone like him. How sweet! I hope this is a chance for her to turn her life around.

  91. 119 Scandinavian June 18, 2009 at 3:07 pm

    oh, thats just heartwarmig

  92. 120 erin June 18, 2009 at 8:16 pm

    this page was great. i hope they fall in love.

  93. 122 japanimummy June 19, 2009 at 12:00 am

    this got me all teary eyed!

  94. 123 Owen Blacker June 20, 2009 at 3:20 am

    Oh, that’s beautiful! This is fascinating!

  95. 124 Mason June 21, 2009 at 8:07 pm

    These are the times when you wana just beat the crap out of Kev

  96. 125 emli44 June 21, 2009 at 11:16 pm

    Out of all the chapters, I must say this is the best.

  97. 126 aydashyera June 22, 2009 at 7:21 am

    love the story,very interesting! ^^

  98. 127 Jenni June 22, 2009 at 9:10 am

    AWWWW! They are so cute. ๐Ÿ˜€ โค

  99. 128 Amber June 22, 2009 at 5:51 pm

    AWWWWWWW!

    I need to get my hands on the Sims 3 ASAP!

    Poor Alice…look at her face on the last pic and on the one talking about her father. Those emotions really take place so well. I need that game Now, but I’ve only got 4 GB on my PC.
    ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

  100. 129 Diamonique June 22, 2009 at 6:18 pm

    Awwwwwwwwwwww thats sweet!

  101. 130 Cynthia June 22, 2009 at 7:43 pm

    Is it sad that I almost teared up at this post?? Wow.

    I was a huuuuge Sims and Sims 2 fan, but I haven’t let myself get the Sims 3 because I now have a dissertation to write and a class to teach–neither of these things would likely get done if I had this game. Alas, I think that Alice and Kev have convinced me that those things are trivial when compared to the hours upon hours upon hours of entertainment and joy I could get from this game!

  102. 131 penny June 23, 2009 at 1:31 am

    AWW. I love this. i bet alice and Z end up being together in the end. keep up the good work.

  103. 132 Ben June 23, 2009 at 8:01 pm

    Oh my God, that was just so amazing. I’m on the verge of tears, TEARS! Not even a published novel has done this to me, so this is definately something.

  104. 133 Alicia June 25, 2009 at 11:52 am

    aww, so nice๐Ÿ™‚

  105. 134 Dan June 26, 2009 at 10:00 pm

    Okay, so, here’s what’s got to happen:

    Alice becomes an adult and she and Zebadias get together and she has a baby, but as the baby starts to grow up and be as nice and sweet as Alice, but Alice came to see herself as special like that, like that’s how she fought against the pain of her traumatic upbringing, homeless with an insane and verbally, physically abusive father: her sweetness. But her kid’s growing up in with a home, which Alice resents, and is being as nice as Alice, which diminishes Alice’s, like, mental defenses against that trauma, and she goes all insane and drowns it in the bathtub and blames it on Zebadias.

    Y/N?

    • 135 Kaila C โ˜†โ˜‚โ™ซ July 1, 2009 at 11:34 pm

      You have a twisted sense of humor,Lol! I certainly hope your prediction doesn’t come true!!!

  106. 136 taylor June 27, 2009 at 7:37 am

    WELL JEEZ DAN !
    JUST RUIN THE WHOLE FKING STORY !
    This is brilliant<33

  107. 137 tottiittot June 27, 2009 at 8:19 am

    You just make me cry……

  108. 138 YanYan June 28, 2009 at 4:44 am

    I burst into tears at the last sentence and picture! Seriously! This doesn’t happen often…

  109. 139 video games June 28, 2009 at 8:25 pm

    I think this ties in sadness with when she cries alone on the bench. *tear*

  110. 140 rachel June 29, 2009 at 7:18 am

    When Alice grows up I want her to move in with Zedadias, and maybe more…

  111. 141 Azalea_Sway June 30, 2009 at 5:08 am

    They’re so cute together!! Well, I hope she reaches adulthood before he grows too old for her. They really have good chemistry and I could picture Zed taking care of her and making sure she’s always wearing a smile. Heck, I could picture them saying their vows!๐Ÿ˜€ Hahaha. Forgive me. My imagination is going crazy for this! You got me hooked!

  112. 142 Kaila C โ˜†โ˜‚โ™ซ July 1, 2009 at 11:32 pm

    I really really enjoy your story! Happy Birthday Alice, and Good Luck!

  113. 143 Mike July 10, 2009 at 8:44 pm

    This is jut wonderful. This story has actually brought tears to my eyes twice now. It is so powerful. Keep up the good work!

  114. 144 Dorkiee July 11, 2009 at 3:19 am

    aaaaaaaaaaaaawwww!!

  115. 145 Kletet July 13, 2009 at 7:51 pm

    Truly amazing.

    What a story!

  116. 146 thebeginningandend July 17, 2009 at 10:20 am

    โค Aw, yay!

  117. 149 devylzangyl July 23, 2009 at 12:39 pm

    This story is so addicting. I think this is my favorite chapter.
    At last, she finally gets some comforting and attention that’s not so negative or hateful.

  118. 150 karatekid444 July 27, 2009 at 6:19 pm

    In the third pic, if u look closly at Alices eyes, they look wet

  119. 151 PK July 31, 2009 at 8:59 am

    This actually moved me to tears.

    How the HELL did you manage that?

  120. 152 cartoonfansparadise August 8, 2009 at 4:09 pm

    awwwwww

  121. 153 Lennina August 19, 2009 at 1:27 pm

    Just started to read this history… and this part is soooo sweet
    I love your sims history *-* so brilliant

  122. 154 Blue Tiger August 31, 2009 at 12:33 am

    I’ve never seen anyone interpret actions in The Sims so well… This is awesome please keep it up!

  123. 155 michaela September 23, 2009 at 9:54 pm

    when you showed the picture for the dad i actually laughed out lod 4 real

  124. 156 MrUnImmaculate September 30, 2009 at 10:08 pm

    Is it bad that I find myself almost in tears at this point in the story?..

  125. 157 Tia Maria October 2, 2009 at 10:01 pm

    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

  126. 158 brittany October 13, 2009 at 12:47 am

    Aww! This is so touching! I absolutely love this story!๐Ÿ™‚

  127. 159 iwantthatgame December 24, 2009 at 5:02 am

    i want that game for xmas but im 11 my parents are probley not gonna like the game if i got it i would download alice and kev child its so sweet

  128. 160 Bria January 5, 2010 at 7:12 am

    You’re making this game look SO good haha
    Don’t get me wrong, it’s an amazingly fun and addicting game, but you’re a pretty good storyteller and you know how to piece things together really well๐Ÿ™‚

  129. 161 Stephen January 23, 2010 at 12:18 am

    I’ve read this whole story many many times over, but this portion is one, if not my favorite part of the entire thing.

  130. 162 shannon February 13, 2010 at 8:20 pm

    the last picture is adorable! good for Alice she has a buddy!

  131. 163 I March 12, 2010 at 11:43 pm

    AWWWW! this out of all the stories so far is the must touching.I nearly burst into tears at the last picture.I’m happy for Ailce!If I could(if she WAS real) I’d give her a big hug.

  132. 164 Jess May 8, 2010 at 7:05 pm

    Awwww… *sniff sniff cry cry*

  133. 165 Alli B December 19, 2011 at 10:30 pm

    Is it just me, or does she look like she’s about to cry?


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My name is Robin Burkinshaw, and I am a student of games design in the UK. I am also known in some places as roBurky.
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