Enemies

When Alice got back to their park the following evening, she found Kev rummaging in the bins again. She wasn’t impressed.

Kev recently got the chance to shower, so he takes the opportunity to mock his daughter.

When she responds and complains that he’s being mean, Kev appears to threaten with physical violence.

Then mocks her again.

Before, it was merely sleeping around her father that was troublesome. Now being around him at any time is intolerable. Alice is feeling insulted and humiliated on top of being hungry, exhausted, filthy and stressed out. She hates her father so much that her mood lowers just from being near him. She is the most miserable she has ever been in her life.

Next: No more hugs. Not even pretend ones.

29 Responses to “Enemies”


  1. 1 Bobsy June 10, 2009 at 9:31 am

    I love how expressive Sims can be. The look on Alice’s face in the second-to-last picture is just absolute gold.

  2. 3 mrsnoobs June 10, 2009 at 8:22 pm

    I’m finding this blog hilarious but slightly disturbed by the domestic abuse. I’m hoping Alice gets one over Kev. Down with Kev!

  3. 4 Rachel June 11, 2009 at 7:06 pm

    Alice’s expression in the second-to-last picture is a little too close to actual domestic violence victims…I’m both impressed at how accurate the modeling is in Sims 3, and sad for Alice. I’m cheering for her to grow up and move away!

  4. 5 JMBIndy June 12, 2009 at 5:06 am

    Crying would display weakness. Hope she wallops him one.

  5. 6 Aldron Aran June 12, 2009 at 3:00 pm

    I love how the story is turning out. I have almost as much fun reading the comments as i do the story.

  6. 7 Chris June 12, 2009 at 3:19 pm

    You say that Kev got a shower at his boss’ house….I thought they were homeless with no money? When did he get a job?

  7. 9 Angelia June 13, 2009 at 9:10 pm

    Oh dear. And here I thought she’d get a chance to make things better for herself. But … this is INTOLERABLE! Oh, and she’s actually really pretty. Maybe she can find someone … :O>

  8. 10 Tiedyemike June 17, 2009 at 9:26 pm

    “Alice is feeling insulted and humiliated … and stressed out. She hates her father so much that her mood lowers just from being near him. She is the most miserable she has ever been in her life.”

    So… she’s a teenager.

  9. 11 Funny June 18, 2009 at 12:32 am

    No Beanie in first pic? hmmm..

  10. 12 Nick June 18, 2009 at 4:55 pm

    I really like reading this, but I have a question.

    Is he just letting them do whatever without choosing what they do, or he is controlling what they do in the game?

  11. 13 Diamonique June 22, 2009 at 5:27 pm

    she need to hurr up and slap him right across his miserable face🙂 lol

  12. 15 lowlast June 24, 2009 at 4:30 pm

    OMG i love the stories of Kev and Alice! u got me hooked!

  13. 16 Kalika June 24, 2009 at 4:42 pm

    Love the pictures🙂
    Where’d she get her new clothing though..? o_o

  14. 19 LG June 25, 2009 at 2:53 am

    Does the game not allow her to leave him, or did you make sure they have to stay together? I’d say, if Alice can blow up on him on her own, she should be able to decide to leave his horrible self behind. Definitely cheering for Alice here.

  15. 22 saw June 29, 2009 at 11:59 pm

    how can you make your sims without shoes??

  16. 23 rskjrsd July 1, 2009 at 11:54 pm

    this is so stupid.

  17. 24 Gladita July 2, 2009 at 7:28 pm

    This story is just… hilarious!! I can’t wait to know waht’s going to happen to Kev and Alice.

    But.. u know… i feel sorry for Kev too, all his anger is just because he is so miserable as well.

    But he shoudn’t treat her daughter that way.

    I think they both need love in their lives.

    MORE DRAMA PLEASEE!!

  18. 25 Sophie July 9, 2009 at 2:36 pm

    Oh my god im auctually adicted to this😀
    ive read it like threetime since i discovered it on the sims 3 website (:
    Poor alice… i think she would make an amazing mom (:
    plese continue and give her her own family (:
    mabey an evil kleptomatic insane slob hating children son ?😛

  19. 26 Gabi August 18, 2009 at 12:50 am

    this might be late cuz u made this a while ago, but it is still amazing! I can’t belive you can think of stuff like this…im not so creative. how did u make them not go home or rummage thro the garbage?

  20. 27 Rain September 7, 2009 at 4:33 am

    It’s getting physical now? Call child services! call the cops! get that nut away from her😄 i❤ ur work Roburky!

  21. 28 kev February 5, 2010 at 7:22 pm

    kev is so immature, he insults his daughter for being smelly, like he isn’t smelly anyway, and like anyone would let him shower in their house.

  22. 29 jemima September 1, 2011 at 6:28 am

    This is absolutely brilliant. Best thing you can do with SIMS yet.


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